Show, Don't Tell ($100)

What makes a story unforgettable to readers are the emotions it elicits in them. If you want to improve your writing and really grip a reader’s imagination, try this add-on. I will point out where your work needs more showing (and where telling is fine!), where your characters need more interiority, and how to develop the emotional elements of your story.

Price based on the first 80,000 words. $25 applies for each extra 10,000 words.